Monday, September 1, 2008

A Very Old Engraved Heart Comments

Rating: 3.7

Looking in my old room, cleaning out
the house after my mother entered her
final rest, as I looked at the walls that
once knew every secret in my tender heart
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Bonnie Collins
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Kesav Easwaran 19 September 2009

Your poem touches a number of old hearts, Bonnie...beautifully styled poetic engraving...thanks...10

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Indira Renganathan 23 July 2009

Sweet golden memories engraved to freshen up oneself....10+++

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Duh Huh 08 April 2009

Beautiful, romantic and nostalgic. Very well done my friend. The engraved heart touched me in the vivid images projected by your poem. A definite 10++++

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Gordon Wilkinson 22 February 2009

wont let me rate it but definate 10

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Gordon Wilkinson 22 February 2009

beautiful memories - very well done

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Ana Zaldivar 19 January 2009

bonnie, this is, beautiful, it is... wow... it left my mind in blank.. i can trully feel you in every word of your poem...

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Michael Gale 12 November 2008

Fond remmembrances of the heart tend to stay with us until the final nod of death from this world, only to find us reconnecting with loved ones again, along with our maker and Jesus Christ. A great write. God bless all poets and loved ones-MJG.

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Jerry Hughes 28 October 2008

Nostalgically beautiful Bonnie, happy remembrances...

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 October 2008

Nostalgia, that often helps! nice write.9

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Robert Sheridan 18 September 2008

Bonnie, Your commitment to poetic excellence is clearly shown in this 'memorable' poem. It shows the reader just how much of our past is still with us... Blessings, Robert

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Stacey Watts 09 September 2008

Very beautifully penned, Bonnie. Your work is romantically brilliant. IT is amazing how we all have memories engraved in our minds.

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Andrew Blakemore 05 September 2008

A really wonderful poem Bonnie, I love it's reflective nature and it also conveys so much warmth. Well done. Love Andrew x

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Bob Gibson 05 September 2008

I touched it to Bonnie! through your eyes, through your poem it was another time and another place, another heart, still etched!

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David Threadgold 03 September 2008

Hi Bonnie. A very touching poem both sad and happy at the same time. a 10 for sure thankyou forsuch a good read. Regards Dave T.

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