Looking in my old room, cleaning out
the house after my mother entered her
final rest, as I looked at the walls that
once knew every secret in my tender heart
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Sweet golden memories engraved to freshen up oneself....10+++
Beautiful, romantic and nostalgic. Very well done my friend. The engraved heart touched me in the vivid images projected by your poem. A definite 10++++
bonnie, this is, beautiful, it is... wow... it left my mind in blank.. i can trully feel you in every word of your poem...
Fond remmembrances of the heart tend to stay with us until the final nod of death from this world, only to find us reconnecting with loved ones again, along with our maker and Jesus Christ. A great write. God bless all poets and loved ones-MJG.
Bonnie, Your commitment to poetic excellence is clearly shown in this 'memorable' poem. It shows the reader just how much of our past is still with us... Blessings, Robert
Very beautifully penned, Bonnie. Your work is romantically brilliant. IT is amazing how we all have memories engraved in our minds.
A really wonderful poem Bonnie, I love it's reflective nature and it also conveys so much warmth. Well done. Love Andrew x
I touched it to Bonnie! through your eyes, through your poem it was another time and another place, another heart, still etched!
Hi Bonnie. A very touching poem both sad and happy at the same time. a 10 for sure thankyou forsuch a good read. Regards Dave T.
Your poem touches a number of old hearts, Bonnie...beautifully styled poetic engraving...thanks...10