Honey bun,
Cold blooded sweetheart,
The time I spent admiring you
Was a casualty unproductive.
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'Let your glamor go to the geese' is priceless - the title is perfect and the 'over the top', Bollywood style of this melodrama is most appealing. You're right - a very Indian Valentine Poem. Superb. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I give you ten for your originality. Excellent satire, Raveendran. Warmest regards, Sandra
I think it would work for a lot of relationships in my country as well. Thanks it was fun to read for being so unique.
Absolutely great and true!