Saturday, July 26, 2008

A Very Important Message I Could Not Understand Comments

Rating: 4.0

The other day
My newborn son
Tried to tell me about oblivion.
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Allan Thorne
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008

I gave this a 9 for two reasons. First, it deserves it for the author's creativity. The author is also very wise. I knew that immediately, when he began to mention his grandson and oblivion. Only a wise man would have such a discussion with his grandson. Second, some idiot, gave this a 7. I had to make sure this poem ends with an 8 average because that is what it is. I recommend this to everyone. GW62

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Anita Atina 26 July 2008

A charming poem indeed!

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