A Verse For My Friend Comments
When I find friends like you
who is so far away
who never saw me,
who did not know
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The magnificent spirit and impact of virtual friendship established through ink that flows from the bottom of the heart is brilliantly articulated in this spectacular write in a very lucid manner..!
bharati, reading this i think once more of the universal outlook that ph fosters. on what is real, for me the outer, the visible, though i surely notice it still there, has become less important as i've gotten older, is more likely to be colored or viewed from the invisible things i sense. glen
- - - - - - universal outlook ph fosters- - -Thank you Poem Hunter for instilling that universal outlook and thank you Glen Kappy for your nice comment.I agree that invisible things that we feel have greater impact on our life.
You have captured the feeling of all sensitive poets on PH. Great write. (10)
Thank you Sri Madathil Rajendran Nair for your valuable comment as well as rating my poem .It is the attribute of sensitive people to pause, ponder and feel the feelings of other people.
ok, you are heretofore flowing through my pen as a moonbeam! i hope ballpoint is ok with you. and, FURTHERMORE, as far as i am now concerned, you are distant from reality. it's not a 'bad' way to look at some PH poets, but i'd rather think of YOU as a human. :) i'll now put this into Section B of my/our January 2017 showcase. it will follow your Merry Christmas poem in the same section. bri ;) p.s. let me know if it does not show up soon in Section B. ;) :)
Hi Bri, How I missed replying to your lovely comment.This poem has become a part of your Show-Case poem of January-2017 along with poems of some great poets of this Site.Thank you very much for the honor.
Even I have written a poem on this subject Bharati...it is Feeble Friendship...whether it is virtual or feeble, truth is that we are able to identify good friends in their good writing which makes us cherish their identity in this site even if we no more hold our membership....no matter we haven't met each other living far away too....still they are our all time adorable friends only....a very good work on friendship Bharati...God bless you my dear friend...thank you for your kind comment on my poem too
Many thanks for visiting my poems and leaving your valuable impressions on them.I fully agree with your views- -whether it is virtual or feeble, we are able to to identify good friends in their good writings which make us cherish their identity- - It does not matter whether we have met them in reality or lived far away from them- - - - -We cherish their adorable friendship.
Friendship flows through flow of pen, hope, dream and reality. Friendship is the greatest feeling ever we feel. This is really an interesting poem.10
Thank you for your nice comment.Yes friendship flow through flow of pen, hope, dream and reality.Friendship is all about our connectedness with others with whom we share our feelings, ideas, joy, sorrow , hope and frustration and who give us strength in our time of distress.
So heartfelt about friendship from a distance where poems tell our stories, pain, love etc as we draw strength from words that bring us back to a memory, feeling, a place where we draw on inspiration. Beautiful write!
Thank you Hazel Durham.for being a friend and support to me through your writings and comments.Words of inspiration, words of love and, words of encouragement are the most important factors of life as they guide us towards Hope and enlightenment ..Here I find many wonderful people who really inspire me.
As for me, I consider you a real friend here long ago! Your words are superb, a poet indeed, be blessed!
I am so grateful that you consider me a real friend.This is such a beautiful comment from a friend who is so far away and yet present near me as a great support.
I like the way you keep open the possibilities of both dream and reality. After all we know that everything we call real to US is just Vishnu's dream of US: our reality, his dream. I find that view of the Nature of Things very consoling, as Shakespeare said, WE ARE SUCH STUFF AS DREAMS ARE MADE OF, AND OUR LITTLE LIFE IS ROUNDED WITH A SLEEP.
Thank you for your valuable comment.As you said some one's dream may be some others reality. Our poems mostly represent a mixture of dream and reality.
Every thing we call real to us is just Visnu's dream of us, our reality, his dream.I like how you explain from the perspective of Hindu philosophy.
what shall i call the tone of this poem? a little spooky? artistic? intelligent? practical? maybe some of each? INTERESTING for sure! i KNOW you are really NOT REAL, but just part of one big PoemHunter dream! ! ! i'm glad you are in it, my 'friend'. bri :)
My poem is spooky+artistic+intelligent+practical- - - - - -What better compliment can I get than this? Thank you Bri Edwards.I am really glad that I am in your friend list and many of my poems have gone to your Show-case.
Friendship has no bounds and the message is so beautifully penned in this poem!
Thank you dear Queeny Gona for reading and commenting on my poem.I feel blessed to have such wonderful friends here.
Friendship is a beautiful feeling that must be cherished n treasured. This poem says a lot. I specially feel that between poetic hearts, there is an eternal friendship, beyond time n space. Distance doesn't matter really. Beautifully written.
Thank you dear Nosheen Irfan for your nice comment.Poetic interaction like reading and commenting on poems make me so happy and inspired.I really cherish such friendship..Wish you a very Happy New Year.
Life is attractive with the rainbow of such friendships, a beautiful poem.
Thank you for reading and appreciating my poems. Yes, I have many wonderful friends on this website.
Thank you.Thank you Edward Kofi Louis as being one of my friends.
Simple and beautiful. Real or virtual, a friend is always valuable and dear t o one's heart. Very nice.Poem with an amazing flow and sweetness.
I agree, real or virtual, a friend is always valuable.Our dreams are also like virtual images without having a real physical entity. Now through computer networking we are able to transfer images, voices and feelings so quickly that we feel like communicating with the real person on our front.In computer games we create virtual entity for a character .such as another Anjelina jolie in Tomb Raider.The virtual image of Anjelina Jolie has the power to impact as like that of real Anjelina.
This is so beautiful, anyone would be blessed to have you as their friend, a wonderful write here Bharati. Annette
You are a wonderful poet, critic and reader dear Annete Aitken.It is my great pleasure to have you as one of my friends here.Thank you very much for your comments.
A beautiful poem out of a beautiful soul... and an intelligent one as well. There are qualities about people that transcend the physical distance... especially writers. I feel I know the important aspects of people on this site- -some are so warm, some are so fragile, some are steeped with egotism, because these aspects creep into their poetry and their comments. I enjoy the heart and mind shimmering beneath the lines of your poetry. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you for your comment which speaks of your generosity and warmth.
A beautiful piece of poetry, deep and so poetic, if one take a moment to reflect on each lines in the first stanza it's like the unreal behaving in reality, while on the 2nd stanza, its the other way around, the truth writing profoundly in the virtual. Truly a masterpiece, a poem worthy in its class. Rated 10+
Thank you Jesus James Llorico for your appreciative words.With advent of computer and networking through social media, it is a new era where real and virtual have come closer.Virtual appears almost real.There is a conflict of identity between real and virtual as we often doubt the real about its identity.
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7/23/2025 12:05:09 AM # 1.0.0
And remember me as a part of your poetry A part of your dream and distant from reality.'.....wonderful perception. This is a brilliant poem on poetic friend having an impressive inscription. Full vote.