Wednesday, September 2, 2015

A Venomous Ode To A Venomous Lady Disguised As A Victimised Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loving you was like a
particle dancing around gaily an event
horizon,
Fearing not the eventual spagatification
...
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Souren Mondal
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Nosheen Irfan 20 February 2016

An honest outpouring of a love-smitten man who fell a victim to the alluring charms of a venomous lady. I really love the title and the lay-out of the poem. The sense of betrayal is very devastating for man. And how it can affect a man is well brought out.

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Souren Mondal 20 February 2016

Thank you Nosheen.. I wrote this at a time when the wounds were too fresh.. To be honest I am a little ashamed of the way I have treated this... Almost a year on, and the venom has died down.. We should always forgive, but never forget.. Those who hurt us once, will hurt again.. But anger at them will inevitably be turned back at ourselves.. Thank you so much for reading - :)

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Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

A nicely envisioned and written poem, Souren

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Souren Mondal 02 September 2015

Thank you for your appreciation Kelly..

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