A Vase In The Corner Comments

Hi Lamont. I'm scrolling through the forums just for the pleasure of reading. This work is very readable, but I'd suggest that you adjust your word processor so that you are in charge of the capitalisation. Meaningful sentences are losing their flow. Take charge of your own enjambement. Good Luck.

Each time i read one of your poems i can see a vivid picture in my head of each thing you describe and its amazing. very lovely

If not a pun, why not fix duel. (?)

a good write Lamont. your opening stanza a delight to read

A poem of great intensity. This really gets a person to do some deep thinking. You have taken me there with this one Lamont. Thanks for sharing.