Wednesday, April 29, 2009

A Vampire's Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broken mirror pieces all around like your broken oaths,
i feel warmth in my wet blood soaked clothes,
locked up in my room of conscience,
hoping to develop my resilience,
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Jerry King
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Isaiah Grey 04 May 2009

Very visual piece... I love the gothic image you've artfully painted.

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Stacey Watts 03 May 2009

Wow excellent piece. I liked the imagery you created. It is truly an amazing piece.

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Shagun Khera 29 April 2009

i have some stuff on similar themes.. read mine..you say you are lonely...nice write by the ways..

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rago rago 29 April 2009

A good write and very well written. You have the potential to excel.

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Jerry King

Jerry King

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