Wednesday, February 2, 2011

A Valentine's Kiss Comments

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It’s a Valentine, and I am with you
Like everyday, how beautiful you look…
Special moments of pleasure and bliss
When we shared our very first kiss…
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Rohit Sharma
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Jenny Gordon 16 February 2011

Wow. And such a romantic tribute to Valentine's Day too...sweetest of memories, intoxicating, sharing the first kiss, an ecstasy of bliss...how very tender, ....how affectionately you depicted it, drawing the imagination into that precious moment....excellent Valentine! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 11 February 2011

very passionate, Rohit..you're a real lover and a good poet...Mari.

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A passionate kiss that produces poetic bliss! Well done my frind.

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