Saturday, February 13, 2016

A Valentine's Day Message Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forgive me if I ever hurt you,
if you still see some colors in me.
Feel me my friend on a lovely day,
if you still feel some odors in me.
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 17 February 2016

Yet another crafty poem from your pen.............Superb Janab....10+++

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Akhtar Jawad 20 February 2016

Thanks Mohammed Asim Nehal.

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Valsa George 16 February 2016

Love, not something sold and purchased, not a pencil image that can be erased, it may be a mirage always chased, but a beauty for that life is praised! Wonderful lines.......! Rather proverbial! ! ! A sure 10

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Akhtar Jawad 16 February 2016

Thanks Valsa George.

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Mithilesh Yadav 14 February 2016

love you sirji......... grrrtt poem

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Thanks Mitilesh Yadav, Hope one day I shall come to Gorakhpur, shall meet you, and with you I shall go to Islamia college, St.andrew's College and Gorakhpur University. Hope I shall listen to your poem on the bank of Rapti.

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Mithilesh Yadav 15 February 2016

Will be eagerly waiting for the same sir, it will be an honour for me..... Thanx

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Hazel Durham 14 February 2016

The magic of your words light up this special day, as you embrace all your friends with the beauty of your spellbinding lines that shine with your beautiful love that falls like the sweet, refreshing rain with the warm sun your heart that shines and we bloom with the beauty of your friendship! Thank you for the gift of your wonderful friendship Akhtar!

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Thanks Hazel Durham, I think that's magic of springs and the Valentine's Day.

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Khalida Bano Ali 14 February 2016

I loved this poem, happy valentine's day.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Forty nine years plus one year of courtship, still you love my poems only. Say something about me.

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Kelly Kurt 14 February 2016

There is no reason why saying I love you on this or any day should be restricted to between lovers. I love you Akhtar. Have a wonderful day

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Thanks Kelly Kurt, I also have lot of love and regards for you,

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Rajnish Manga 13 February 2016

How nice of you to have shared these sublime thoughts radiating love of an eternal lover. My nights are the nights of blue stars, I am still twinkling in your shining eyes, friends like me are rare and few.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Thanks Rajnish Managa, you are on e of my best friends.

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Souren Mondal 13 February 2016

'If you see my colors are faded away, I suppose your lips are still pink. I'm sure I'm still sleeping in thoughts, and your poetic dreams can still ink.' Such beautiful lines Akhtar sahab.. Yes we go like flowers falling from a tree, but leave a mild fragnance behind, for the rest of those to come after us and smell the same way.. Thanks for sharing, ,

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Dear Friend, I feel your amazing fragrance through your colorful poems.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 February 2016

lots of wonderful scenes to comprehend...Thank you for sharing your lovely thought here..

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Thanks V.S., what's the meaning of V.S. by the way, I take it as very sweet.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 13 February 2016

the air joining us is humid enough, a few dew drops from blue skies My nights are the nights of blue stars, my dawns are washed by drops of dew...........every single line is full of deep and endless love.....deep poem with so deep meaning.....loved it......amazing sharing.....thank you sir :)

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Thanks Abhilasha Bhat, one of my favorite poets and a lovely friend.

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