A Vague Valentine (Senryu) Comments

" through ash and embers fiery words melt upon an undelivered card" 'Undelivered card' and 'vague valentine'..this nice poem is very short in length but it conveys the exact message

A fantastic write with each word conjuring up an image.

loved this poem, especially the first two lines, which is why I voted 10+++, kinda like Mohammed, but sure why but the last line keeps reading (unsigned) undelivered card :) I do not know why but this poem sings in my soul and maybe through ash and embers — fiery words melt upon an unsigned undelivered card is just me, beautiful poem, read with appreciation :) and over the last few weeks I have not really been doing poetry any more, economics keeps getting in the way Blessings upon your life, your work, your writing, your love and passion always Mihaela

Fantastic haiku....Hope it reached the correct heart now.....10++++