Monday, November 30, 2009

A Vacuum Of Dreams! Comments

Rating: 2.6

The playground is forlorn
The player a grieving loner,
Games were battles; they decided my fate!
One after another, every defeat
...
Read full text

abhilash fraizer
COMMENTS
Allemagne Roßmann 13 February 2010

Weaving the dream I have loved ever Waiting for the shower I have loved ever...! Outstanding poetic skills displayed here.10./10 again. Do read my Stiletto-Tanka page-2 poem-38.

0 0 Reply
young writer Athira 30 November 2009

hey just superb...........10/10

0 0 Reply
abhilash fraizer

abhilash fraizer

Cochin, Kerala
Close
Error Success