A Useless Poem Comments

You gave your name as Yong church. and the themes spoken in the first stanza is of a man and in the second stanza is of a girl. please do not say have heard of this god but I do not care.. but GOD CARES FOR YOU MY DEAR POET: that is why he made u write such a poem. thank you . tony

'I see no difference between me and this useless poem'. It comes across as a sad poem to me, that one can be alive, vibrant, able to do anything and yet waste this temporary life on foolishness. Things that tear down spirits and self- esteem, also reflect in poetry as if it is a mirror. This poem reflects the usefulness of the person in sending a message to other young people to open their eyes before it's too late. Excellent poem! ! I give it a 10! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Catchy title. The poem is infinitely better than the person described in the poem. A nice piece. Thanks for sharing.

Original and sassy full of uncontrollable young people living life in a sad way! Thanks for sharing this great write

wow, this is a useful poem...very good.....tnx.....for the poem and the invite

loss of life in a drain loss of youth/ with the message this one is not useless

I know the meaning....when behave something bad it equal to useless poem..is it? _Soul

Very good Poet! But how about change the title? A Useful POem! ! ! ! ! Thanks for invite me, really! ! ! !

A very sad and gripping poem. It hurts me to think that people feel that they are worthless. Your words were very eye opening. Excellent poem!

hahaha i just love Young Church, you are always honest and that's the best part of your poetry.nice useless piece.lol