A Unique Mobile Comments
Day and night I check my mobile's screen
To read my friends messages or see missed calls
For this I am ever ready and keen
So much from space in my simple lot falls.
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A primitive impulse to stay connected to God, that made pagans worship the deities...the poet's heart gets the relief in the mystic realization in the last stanza...though the technology -register is used but technology is not actually meant here...the classical poets search God's creatures to praise Him, n the modern mystic approach touches the man-made things n then touches God...the alternate rhyme takes the effortless natural flow...yess we receive msgs...but most of the time...this unique mobile we keep off....an eye-opener! ! !
nice and true, without technology we feel lost and disconnected. a nice write. thanks for your comments on my poems. take care
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7/18/2025 7:51:31 PM # 1.0.0
Yes! telepathy which shall convey the message without charge and balance. A good write.