Thursday, February 25, 2021

A Unique Love Story. Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was wearing a Bluetooth headset,
Talking to someone, very dear.
And next to him, a blind girl,
quiet and dejected, silently cursing her life
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M. Asim Nehal
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Zoyza Da Vinka 01 March 2021

A surprising poem with interesting twist.

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Michael Jack 27 February 2021

Yes all disappeared.

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Gordon Walter 25 February 2021

I agree, it is one of its kind.

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Michael Jack 25 February 2021

Fascinating storyline. Nice poem,

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Captain Cur 25 February 2021

Well it appears they both walked off the bus very happy. The man saying sweet things to his beloved, and the blind girl believing she had been noticed.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 February 2021

That sad. Two people miscommunicating. Every one needs love. Great love poem.

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Varsha M 25 February 2021

Sir whether to be angry or be pathetic. Whom to blame and who be sufferer. But a miscommunication bloomed.A good poetic reflection.

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Kostas Lagos 25 February 2021

Most excellent poem!

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