Saturday, October 3, 2009

A Unique Kind Of Drunkeness Comments

Rating: 5.0

the usual wine
the favorite rhum and the well sought vodka
or martini
scotch on the rocks or you common margarita
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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 07 October 2012

A good expressive write. Here's how I wrote mine: Drunken Sonnet When in my lowest stock of wine and praise I just content myself with this cheap beer And wish in some hotel I with my raise In yuletide, enjoying a good cheer; But most I get from work that I contend, Is reprimand from bossy chief and staff, And scorn from lady love whom I pretend, To have, when all I get from her is chaff; And thinking of this love, this love of fools, That no angel finds worthy of a cent, Spit out, might I, in any of my drools, And wonder how my glossy life have went; .... Seeing your face, and hearing your tirade, .... I might with bandits give my life to trade.

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Tai Chi Italy 03 October 2009

lol this is such a sweet rhyme...the final lies had me looking for the n doh! Smiling at you Tai

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