Thursday, July 12, 2007

A Uniformed Drop Comments

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A uniformed drop
catches a flare,
a reflection.
Rainbow colors
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Ernestine Northover 12 July 2007

A brilliant write Kristin, I love the repeating throughout the verses, and the subject is just great. It is nice to see that 'drop' isn't 'dropp' anymore, they must have sorted out the problem. A pleasure to read this one. How are you fairing? Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 12 July 2007

This would be truly beautiful if it only referred to the 'drop, ' but I see and feel so many more of life's lessons behind these words as well. It is so very deeply personal, isn't it? Well Done!

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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