Monday, January 20, 2014

A Tyrant Queen Comments

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A queen of beauty;
She is looked upon
By all and at her sight,
Everyone looks happy.
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Nika Mcguin 31 January 2014

pure genius! : 3 (I would note though that you really don't need all of those commas. by creating such short lines we the readers are already pausing at the end of each one, reading slowly, and taking it all in.: 3)

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