Friday, May 25, 2018

A Two Pipe Problem Comments

Rating: 5.0

I light another.
You say "That's not the answer,
That cancer stick! "
Look, dick, I reply.
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Tom Billsborough
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Susan Williams 29 May 2018

I think I may have discovered a clue to the reason behind your cats' grumpy and sometimes anti-social behavior, Tom. I am grinning here especially by the lines I'm on the cusp of some great verse /But this rhythm stinks and worse./ Like a flat tire on the car./ It won't get far / Unless I sort it soon- - ] Well, Sherlock, I suppose you sniffed out already that I give this a two pipe rating of 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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