Tuesday, April 14, 2009

A Tunnel Of Fear Comments

Rating: 3.1

question mark on the lips
and you are going into dark tunnel
of the gloomy ill nature
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Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar
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Afzal Shauq 31 July 2009

question mark on the lips and you are going into dark tunnel of the gloomy ill nature reality is your only base of your poetry..thats why its interesting and heart feeling... the composition of words and verses is perfectly handled and the thoughtful idea has expressed very sweetly..well done 10/10

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Joseph Poewhit 14 April 2009

Though once in that tunnel only the end is an escape.

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Barry A. Lanier 14 April 2009

The poetess Dagmata has penned the futility of what I call my running in circles...the anxiety of defeat of the mind heading in multiple directions, yet stalled as she so eloquently put it 'time stayed in place' the aura of impending doom yet the human condition forges ahead

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