Many years before
They had made a pact
On a Tuesday in June
That should they
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Hi Dee. I used to collect antiques but I dont think they were the same kind. a good read thanks. Regards Dave T.
Wrap it up. .I'll take it! Loved the story of it and the wonderful writing of it...grow old along with me the best is yet to be...lovely poem with just the right amount...a pinch of cutness and just enough matureness to add flavour to the words. i love it! love Dee Dee(Wright...that's right!)
most reveling to the spirit of love protracting, let my raved up feelings retreat into its own fold left behind carring this piece for a semblance smooching, well penned, i do adore admire
Yes, this is cute, but not too cute. Warmly sentimental, and so down to earth. Nice work.
Dee, I really loved this one and the seductive humour in it. Made me smile. I think I'm a fossil not an antique. Great write. Thanks for sharing it. David
xlent. really enjoyed reading this. loved the ending. gona keep it.
mmm... antiques.... a little dusty but once you give them a good polish, so much beauty! ! Great write - I like this a lot! HG: -) xx
Excellent Dee, a slight bit of humour, I like that.---Melvina---
Dee, I never liked that ... about taking skin off of cats! but, there is more than one way to be naughty!
Dee - this is very sweet and penned with warmth and gentle humour. Love it. Allie xxxx
Dee, you are surely much too young to be writing funny tales like this. Thank you for the laugh! ! xx jim
Brilliantly placed, you have a lovely way about your writting darling, well done, a pleasure to read. Love duncan X
It made me think for a while. Then I got it, good poem