Friday, April 10, 2009

A Tuckingmill Bird Comments

Rating: ★5.0

My heart is astir with what this morning
I caught aloft under a bluebell sky.
A bird who trills high, yet smaller than small
Is it's frame, and seemed to be making reply
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Fay Slimm
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Alison Cassidy 14 April 2009

Great use of enjambment in this lyrical feathered feast. Your 'bluebell sky' is particularly enchanting. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Fiona Davidson 10 April 2009

That must have been a fabulous sight Fay...birds do lift your spirits don't they...lovely write as always from your hand...Fi...10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm
in Cornwall U.K.
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