A Tube Rose Comments

A unique poem. Lovely expression. Loved this endearing poem dear poetess. Top score and to my favourite! !

It’s an elegant piece of poetry! Very simple and lucid expression with a liquid movement from opening word to last word! I would love to quote a few fascinating lines of your poem: “I see a tube-rose/Or a rose/Or any other flower/I feel overwhelmed/By the fragrance”. Thanks for sharing!

That was a great gesture, the significance of which you must have understood only later.....! It was an exchange of hearts. Each time when you think of it, I am sure, it gives you a tingling sensation all over! Lovely memory!

Awesome read Mam, Wearing my heart on your heart! beautifully personified Ma'am.... very pleasant read to enjoy!

The love that filled the small tube rose! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

Thanks Bharti for sharing..a lovely romantic poem

A tube rose as a symbol of love. Good rendition! Thanks for sharing.

Fantastic expression. A lovely poem that touches the heart. Thanks for sharing. .....10

Thank you for your nice comments.They are really inspiring.

Oh I fell to my past losing my heart the words of lines scrolled me out to get my past what else left me to think again Oh blank my brain, paralysed the foot I cannot go back, all I got here Thanks for good work. If time permits I will write my critics later May peace & blessing of Allah with you

A beautifully stitched love poem -

Cloyed with love the poem gives instant relief to a weary mind. A poem to remember for ever. Beauty.