The Universe is God
You did not know?
They do not tell
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Bhgwat Gita says that we are soul and god is supersoul.We are only a part of this supersoul.After our death we become one with this supersoul.The union of soul with supersoul is called salvation.You have conveyed this message very beatifully.Very good philosophical poem
The Truth, The cycle of Life, The Universe, Balance...Love..Lovely!
Good choice of form and use of repetition. The question is effective. You have a unique voice and know how to deliver a message.
Whole Mole! ! ! UNIVERSE IN A VERSE, DEEP reading DEEP thought...Whole MOLE! ! ! You can put us all into DEEP thought :) Circling into life's greatest Miracle: Your ART...Shared :) THANK YOU from my Heart!
The Universe is God All within it too Including You.........God in us andpresent everywhere.Thy presence isfelt even in smallest particles and here lies the essence of message. almost allthe epics say and reveal about it...well dome and it is beautifullu presented here.....10 read mine go back....i m disgrace...humble submission