A True Woman Comments

Asim, I ASSUME....[though I used to hear that 'assuming' can 'make an ASS out of U and ME]...that the woman of your vision is NOT (or maybe IS) and AI aka Artificial Intelligence Woman. : ) 5 ***** stars bri

By 'untold' I think you MUST mean definition # 2: 'untold ŭn-tōld′ adjective 1 - Not told or revealed.2 - Beyond description or enumeration.3 - Not told; not related; not revealed.

I question 'stem' in the last stanza. You seem to be 'reaching' there, ...a lot I think. What do YOU think? ? ?

stanza 4, line 2: I'd go with 'fearless creature' for more than one reason. stanza 5: Well, Asim, I HOPE she smiles into her pillow at night, as I NEED my sleep.

'flowing gracefully, like a melody very rare, ' I'd be tempted to use 'a melody most rare', to shorten the line and to pick up the alliteration melody/most. ;)

Very Beautiful Asim TFS

The subject line being 'dream', I like to say that every man may be having some images of an ideal woman to be his life partner.Many are lucky to realize their dreams, but not all.