A True Story Of Massacre Near New Year Comments

I felt sad for the unfortunate humans called palestinians The sand dunes once wandered over by Moses, Christ, Prophet Muhammad was soiled by the blood of innocents.. Lord please provide peace and freedom to the oppressed people

I feel sorry for those suffer in wars. What is your standpoints then tell me

Ahmad, like you I feel sad for the plight of the Palestinians, for sixty years they have fought to right the wrong and gain their homeland again. But somtimes a cause only breeds more hate, which causes even more death and suffering to family, freinds and children. What is needed is a just compromise by the Israeli's to end the bloodshed. Just think if they felt love for each other there would be no problem and they could all help to build one land for all.

A VERY VIGOROUS PIECE. GET 10++............

Powerful piece with sharp, penetrating images. I can feel the frustration and hopelessness. As you point out there are more worthy horizons to strive for.

fantastic write! Thans for sharing.

Those people have lost their hearts, they have sold it to evils. They hear women's screaming as calming melody. Great piece.

I feel satisfied that somebody thinks on suffered people of our world, mainly in this special date. Congratulations!

that's a nice description of the condition, my friends.. nice works..

I agree with you that war is the worst torment to this world and living things but yet this tagedy still continue on and on, what can we do but just pray to god that this will end quickly and less lives lost.

Dear Ahmad, I feel strongly about this situation in the Middle East which your poem so aptly describes.However, I think that both sides should cease from aggression.I empathize with the bereaved on both sides.

a good message that may apply to others also, i like particularly this part I feel it's not your ears which def but your hearts I feel it's not your eyes which blind but your senses good job, good job.

The greatest message for humankind! A proof freedom of words..hope this would be the key to freed people from devil's embrace. A great poem! Of tomorrow's promise..of humanity..of hope... Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem! Very captivating..a 10+++!

Bravo... This poem is awesome... I really liked the meaning behind it... Very powerful piece... You have outdone with this piece... Keep up the great work...: -) Honest Luck... Maryam

Yes, we are able to experience the agony that you are undergoing in!

You should read MATT: 24 in the Bible. Times of the gentiles. Jesus will return on MT. OLIVE and stop it all