A True Story Comments

Inner heart expression of spiritual awakening and nice poem.

again...its a deep spiritually inclined piece that espouses shunning the self a subject perpetually in the focus of philosophers and sages great write...superb subject cheers

wow..is he Neo the chosen one from Matrix....anyway enjoyed your story very much.....thanks 10++

The true story of a great character! One who suffers all ridicule to make others enjoy........... Great poem, great concept. A bit near to my small poem 'Fall guy'

honesty and simplicity personified...good work, Kranthi...i liked...10

Profound expression, Kranthi. I like it! !

this poem can be taken as a two -fold it could be about a person now known, or it can be a spiritual poem relating to christ. either way, it is a good write. a ten.

that poem went stright to my heart, it is so amazingly written, I LOVE IT, it speaks of so much I think I like it because I've been to some of those feelings once or twice my self. AMAZING WRITE! ! ! !

We, as writers or poets, write(s): what we feel, what we observe, what our own views and opinions, and others as well. Taking all the subjective and objective matters into papers....here you pointed out what the protagonist feels and described his life in a summary form. I may look at this as a biographical poetry as you are describing yourself in this piece....Penned nicely in eloquence and great rhythm.........

Self contentment is very important. Also what values we ascribe to.

Well this poem was easy 2 read like your flow as always Interesting write