A True Man Comments

Very well written poem, you inspired me to write ' A True Woman'. My answer to your poem. Hope someday you will read and comment.5****

I peeked at parts of some other poems from you. THIS poem I feel deserves notice and I give five ***** stars. bri : )

(cont.) ...AFFECTATION: (one definition, which is quite different than others I found) : 'Strenuous pursuit or desire; earnest quest; a striving in the direction (of) .'

Your last line (or two lines) bother(s) me some. Partly it's the use of 'affection'. I found one definition of 'affectation' which may fit better, as follows. (cont.)

'Forget it', if I said there might be a typo in your Poet's Notes. I like your bio here. Now I'll finish reading, BUT, I see your initials are 'BAD'. Hmm? ? : )))

Overall, I'm enjoying your poem very much. [ I think there's a typo in you Poet's Notes. ] I admire your rhymes, but am glad you 'skipped' at least one.

One of 3 definitions for 'abscond' [in stanza 9]: 'To hide, withdraw, or be concealed.'. Welcome to PH. I'm laughing within at the photo; does the woman have doubts? ? ? ! : ) bri

Very sensitive, I'm sprung 😊