Tuesday, November 19, 2013

A True Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love you
I love you too
says every Mr. A, B and C
to every Ms. E, F and G.
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Kavya . 19 November 2013

a good one and rightly said that true loving is missing.........One who fills the vacuum in your life is your true love!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 November 2013

as you so truly say, i miss you reflects love's durability while the other is often merely impulsive.

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Wahab Abdul 19 November 2013

this is your best trying in to give variation to poetry structure and style..you are 100 percent successful and i agree with what Valsa Said in her comment...10

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Valsa George 19 November 2013

'I love you' is a statement often said, but never lived! This poem has a unique structure and I thoroughly agree with what you have tried to express here! Enjoyed this meaningful write! !

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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