Friday, January 15, 2016

A True Love Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

Adorned he the wooden hovel with white orchids
and roses
As they were the favorite of his princess he awaited
Candles lit around at every crimson corner, their
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Nishi Kumari
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Chinedu Dike 16 January 2017

Beautiful narrative piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with conviction. Lovely poem indeed. Thanks Nishi.

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Nishi Kumari 09 February 2017

Thank you for reading and your precious views....

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2016

Fresh like the wet clay! ! Nice piece of work.

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Nishi Kumari 09 February 2017

Thank you so much for your appreciation and views...

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Aabid Masroor 12 February 2016

Nicly done, good piece of work.

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Nishi Kumari 12 February 2016

thank you for your comments..

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Fabrizio Frosini 03 February 2016

Hi Nishi, I've just sent a msg; please, let me know if interested... Thanks

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 02 February 2016

Amazing....true love suffers a very sad fate sometimes....the ending has been written very beautifully...such a lovely poem...

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Nishi Kumari 03 February 2016

Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your views..

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M Asim Nehal 30 January 2016

OUTSTANDING! ! ! ! ! ! No words can describe the beauty of this poem. At this tender age such a masterpiece from you...God Bless You and May you grow in poetic world like a full moon in the sky....Love it, Beyond ratings...1000++++

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Nishi Kumari 01 February 2016

Thank you so much for your valuable comments...am overwhelmed...

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Rajnish Manga 16 January 2016

Lovely poem. The narrative takes us on a poignant journey that ends in a heart-break. Thanks. He dreams of her in his every breathe His princess perhaps was not so generous Thundered the heart of the indigent lover

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Nishi Kumari 17 January 2016

thank you fir your comments and appreciation...

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Abhishek Mishra 16 January 2016

Omg..it's a masterpiece. Hoe do write this well and meaningful. Keep it up. :)

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Nishi Kumari 16 January 2016

thank you..my pleasure you liked it..

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