A TRUE CONFESSION!
‘This world is never the same dear Lord,
Which you had created in just seven days;
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Really from the bottom of your heart is this poem... 'I fear Your angels don’t inform you these days'...I think everyone has this question....adorable words....a true confession
the world is definitely on the wrong path no doubt about that JUSTIFICATION is there for every one the terrorist, killer every one JUSTIFICATION IS THERE without which not a single soul can last here walking on the wrong path is definitely not human tendency but we do and justify it too
Sir, Confession and repentance redeems of all sins. Beautiful confession and a prayer from the core of your heart. Regards, CP
yeah, may God forgive our sins.. all of the people on the world such a nice poem thanks for sharing with me luwi
i like the detailing in your poem, particularly 'I fear Your angels don’t inform you these days! ' it has a striking relevance in today's time. Thanks for a thought-provoking poem.really appreciate it.
dear raj ji, let everything change except values... sad, they only vanish first....
An earnest outcry. But the Milton's murmur soon replies, God doth not need Either man's work or his own gifts, who best Bear his milde yoak, they serve him best, his State Is Kingly. Thousands at his bidding speed And post o're Land and Ocean without rest: They also serve who only stand and wait. CP
Mere har shabd mein har din Tera hee naam hota hai Tere darshan se he mera Har bigda kaam hota hai Tu hee allah, tu hee hai ram Mere dil mein bas tera hee naam Teri tasveer kea aage mein sajda roj karta hoon Teri har aah pe jalim mein sau sau bar marta hoon Utha le aaj mujko, lagale gale se tu Tere darshan, tera pyar hee hai meri justjoo Tujh hee pe mar ke mujko ek din gujar jana hai Jo sab bolen jahan mein bas tera ek hee deewana hai. pls include my name in the confessioner's list
This world is never the same dear Lord, Which you had created in just seven days; I am one of your many sinful slaves, it was never as u intended to live..i am sinful here... what an anguish in poet's mind.. lovely write...10 read mine go back and i am disgrace...comment
Very good write...meaningful...we have so many good (or bad?) reasons to confess...whether God is willing to accept them or not is what remains to be seen...good awareness poem...thanks...10
this poem contains a confession and same time a prayer..wow..you really spread the brilliance found in oneself dear..grace
excellent piece.. a genuine confession that every human should make..10 up.
Your conversation with God is very touching. Prayer is a solace to the human heart. Take care. Kind regards, Sandra
Rajda, Your God-fearing confession was awesome...Keep on writing some more. (I think the word should be 'angels' instead of 'angles') . Cheers. Subroto
This is a prayer of every man Spoken or hidden And here it is written. Confessions always console Consolation throws new light Getting under the briteness a personal choice. Ver good write indeed Enjoyed this work
first a confession, and then a plea- man deserves no compassion- we need to do introspection. very touching poem, written with a lot of reverence after a lot of reflection.10 mamta
Truly remarkable piece of poetry.....a true confession with a great message and awareness, concern and love to the world....10++++++
Nice write on humanity, faith, GA, nature and addressed to God, i really admire the idea.