Sunday, February 21, 2016

A True Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.3

She watched
And she cried
As she sat there
And watched true horror
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Olivia .o
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2016

Blown to pieces All scattered in the wind She would never truly love again Because of him.. terrible experience dear poet........ you have power in your words. you have depth in your emotions..... a very nice poem . thank you. tony

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Atasha Williams 21 March 2016

Very emotive and sad.. Keep up the gr8 work :)

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Prof Manu Mangattu 21 February 2016

Nice poem. The heplessness of a forlorn beloved is beautifully captured in these melancholy lines. Reminiscent of the poem Poor Girl by the great Maya Angelou. Thanks for sharing

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