Saturday, October 24, 2009

# # A True Being Comments

Rating: 3.7

run amok
do what you want to
chase your pleasures
find your dreams
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Sandra Martyres 01 November 2009

Be yourself....very good advice in these poetic lines 10

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 30 October 2009

Excellent lines.It is important to be natural.Do what you want to, of course as long as it does not harm others.But how many of us can do that, we get carried away by some artificial norms and ethics.

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Lynda Robson 30 October 2009

Always be true to yourself, thanks for this 10 Lynda xx

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C. P. Sharma 29 October 2009

Tethered to base desires our being, How can the songs of immortality sing! ! ! ! ! CP

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Sandhya S N 29 October 2009

truth packed verses ofcourse an advice too... beautiful regards sandhya

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Antonio Liao 29 October 2009

even in the closing of the eyes the dream whisper....like a true being it purify the illusion of time......yes! child came first in the kingdom of God... for they believe the beginning of trust in the Lord....hope and pray that we will come to start again...God bless....a 10 +++ excellent

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such a person i wish be changed to good... my wish for the whole world... sweet poetry.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 28 October 2009

A true being is one who's true to nature. Allow life to ebb and flow like the ocean.A nicely written poem, sam. I love it...a 10

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Joseph Poewhit 28 October 2009

Words to think about

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Maitreyee Joshi 28 October 2009

indeed, a wonderful expression of the freedom of being.it made me feel so free.thanks for sharing.

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Patti Masterman 27 October 2009

This is different sounding advice for sure. Everyone is always all about duty and always unhappy. Perhaps the value of some moderation is what appeals here..(smile)

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Ravi A 27 October 2009

Be natural and original without missing the philosophy of life. 'Do not try to be good' - I think that you have used 'good' to mean 'unnatural'. Otherwise it requires a reflection.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 October 2009

So my friend you want to say that 'man' by nature is a 'brute' or 'devil'. This is totally against the Indian perception.........Our philosophy says that man by nature is 'God' but acquires all inhuman characters due to his wandering mind and craving heart and when once he starts seeking the truth of himself, realizes HIM

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Surya . 25 October 2009

it is true and good if everything goes well. voted10 surya

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Smiley Hooker 25 October 2009

Nothing can make you feel happier than being true to yourself. One can fool anyone but himself! Very well done, Sam! :)

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Carol Gall 25 October 2009

this is wll written...

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Ramesh T A 25 October 2009

Natural is real and better in life!

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Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2009

that's your true being...you advocate your theories very courageously SLN!

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Indira Babbellapati 24 October 2009

yeah, good and bad are human constructs...

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