A Troubled Wandering Cloud-Sonnet Comments

This is wonderfully written. Great meaning in a very smoothly flowing sonnet. I enjoyed the read very much.

Hi Joseph: ^) This is a great and meaningful write. Love it xxx

I was offhandedly introduced to your page by Thomas... I'll thank him for that...and you for this... a fabulous pen, Sir! And as a fellow Kentuckian please allow me to express pride in a common heritage... I tip my hat to you, Sir!

Oh yes i agree with u heart n soul. Acid rain and many diseases are as a result of man's doings and environmental and moral corruption and pollution. Yors was a creative tour de force imagind frm a cloud's vantage point. Kudos.

Absolutely wonderfu, right on and meaningful! Beautiful poetry.

A fantastic poem, if we all could look down and see the beauty we are destroying maybe things would change.

Seeing the plight of Mother Earth, caused by man's reckless exploitation of the natural resources and his assault on the enviorns, clouds shed tears of pain, releasing cascades of acid rain! ! Great Imagination! A great Sonnet and a10

Beast! ! .Lol. I wish I'd thought of a sonnet. You really have the form perfect Joe. This is outstanding. Big 10

Beautiful Sonnet.... You have covered all the wonders of nature from the deep oceans to the top of the mountains When the clouds shed out tears it will look like rain When we shed out bitter and painful tears it will look like cascades of acid rain. Enjoyed reading each lines. Thanks for sharing with us.

Wonderful Joseph - also similar to my post some time ago entitled Birds Eye View.