Thursday, October 8, 2009

A Troubled Star Comments

Rating: ★4.8

She was to me, a troubled star
Burning in breathless beauty without a reason
A single twinkle on this blackened soul
A rigid lighthouse, an erratic beacon
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R. Ariffin
star beach grief
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Chinedu Dike 23 May 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Sonya Florentino 09 October 2009

'my long lost heaven'.....how can I not love this poem?

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Patti Masterman 09 October 2009

This reminds me so much of the classic love poets of yesterday. This piece would have fit then so well, but I like it even more, as something so fresh and new, in my own time.

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Vijay Menon 09 October 2009

a very beautiful heavenly poem 10++

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R. Ariffin

R. Ariffin

Johor, Peninsular Malaysia
R. Ariffin
R. Ariffin
Johor, Peninsular Malaysia
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