Friday, October 4, 2013

A Troubled Pet Comments

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One of my friend gifted me a dog
I kept it, in my farm, to guide
Thought; What a lovely pet
My mind was completely set
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Aftab Alam
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V P Mahur 09 March 2014

Dear Aftab very well said. a nice sarcasm. I liked it. This one for you. 'Unique Creation' O Creator of all! Just tell me clear From where You brought the stuff To create a mother So full of endurance And so tough To bear all the hardships Of bringing up ...................... ......................... You can read full text on my page. I invite you to read my poems and give your views. Thanks!

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Khairul Ahsan 05 October 2013

He could be the Speaker in the dogs' parliament!

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 05 October 2013

heemmm...a kick came flying from the side, on the last line. cynical... :)

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Wahab Abdul 05 October 2013

good story to tell people..punch at the last line.. like it.....

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Ken E Hall 05 October 2013

For sure like a politician maybe you should send the dog to parliament...funny dog indeed

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