Monday, September 22, 2008

A Troubled Mind Comments

Rating: 4.7

A troubled heart, a troubled mind
that never meant to be unkind.
No way to undo what's been done
Nowhere to hide nowhere to run
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Tia Maria
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Duh Huh 17 April 2009

Wow, keep telling it like it is with your wisdom and talent. There is always something new for me to ponder when i come read a poem. Your poems are so real. Thank you for sharing :)

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Min Sia 09 November 2008

Very well defined! ! After sin comes the endless guilt.

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Chitra - 17 October 2008

useful lessons embedded in these pearls of wisdom

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Tj Becker 16 October 2008

Well said, it seems even after our apologies are accepted, the wrong eats at us. Our guilt fairy; -)

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Dwayne Bailey 05 October 2008

The past is gone and can not be changed, but you can learn to forgive yourself which is the greatest forgiveness on can give. A beautiful write one in which I can feel your pain.

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Linda Moore 04 October 2008

To make amends and be forgiving sometimes takes time, but it must be done for us to be happy.........10 I like this very much

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Tom Balch 02 October 2008

Be not troubled, look for the good, regards Tom

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Ency Bearis 02 October 2008

words of wisdom..well written/rhymes.. Ency Bearis

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 September 2008

Wise words Tia Maria... Andy 10

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 22 September 2008

Here, here. Love this poem, it's easy for me to relate to.

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Kris Smith 22 September 2008

That was such an honest poem, one can learn lessons from it 10x10 Chris

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