Monday, March 17, 2014

A Troubled Boy Comments

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Early on a sunny morning, while a bird sing the sweetest song, the sleeping doll trapped in a tunnel deep underground, i saw two kids fighting to rescue it, while the wind ask me are they heroes or driven by some jelousy motive? What change has
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Lihle Shezi 11 January 2016

I love the creativity behind this poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 June 2014

I say a captivating poem and great how u picture the multitude scenes. Wow. Nice to read u again. Im a lady not sir.

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Yusuf Rashid Pyrus

Yusuf Rashid Pyrus

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