Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, March 16, 2010

A Trouble In Offing Comments

Rating: 4.8

It didn’t trouble me when she said” I love you”
It also didn’t bother me when she repeated “I hate you”
It didn’t surprise me when she smilingly said” I need you”
It altogether sent me in shock when she said” I need you”
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Katie Cordell 22 March 2010

This was a lovely read; very inspiring, thank you for telling me about it :)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 March 2010

‘…Love is after all God’s gift and can’t be had at paying prize I accept it as simple divine shower and happily summarize ‘ Fabulous finish … true Love now-a-days is as rare as pure Heart We’ve lost that heart and ….egoic [selfish] with preponderance of egotism… I’m the best … Before marrying or falling in love we must read good poems as primer to make us receptacle of Love 10++

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Brooke Mcminn 18 March 2010

Wow, this poem is really deep, and I absolutly love it! It is something that I'm sure people go through, but just don't relize it. The fact that you could see what was going to happen in a way, but still keeping it quiet was amazing!

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BrittanyXD S 18 March 2010

That was great. definitely 10/10! you have a great way of putting things so i can imagine it. I can imagine what your going through. I really loved it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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