Wednesday, January 14, 2015

A Triumph Comments

Rating: 5.0

The accolade reassures
I grapple on, steadfast,
Draining, the heat in my temple
Burns a thousand strokes of fire.
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Elisha Wall
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Lyn Paul 02 February 2015

Your pen goes well beyond the paper. A Triumph indeed. Thank you

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Evensong 21 January 2015

You remind me of the metaphysical poets of the Elizabethan era, such phenomenal power of expression from your young hand.

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Clarence Prince 20 January 2015

Uplift, a cheerful voice Fight, in the power of God True, it's only by God's power victory will achieve! Well done, L. E. O!

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Babatunde Aremu 20 January 2015

Great! Victory belongs to Jehovah. Keep the pen flowing

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Phillip Joshua Jimenez 19 January 2015

Hallelujah! Indeed, by God's grace alone can we be victorious over all the hardships of this life. Soli Deo Gloria!

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Valsa George 14 January 2015

When we fight in the power of God, we are sure to become conquerors! In a meditative moment, perhaps a revelation can 'uncloak' and stardom comes to us! Enjoyed this beautiful poem with deeper spiritual dimensions!

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 14 January 2015

Now this is a spiritually charged poem with wide spread encouragement and hopeful acknowledgement of God's power! It is one which deserves meditation... victory in the end! Well done poet friend. Loyd C Taylor, sr

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