A Trip To The Valley On My Bicycle Comments
My old bicycle was clinking soft
As I pedalled down the plains
Dews were getting crushed under the wheel
Flinging up to trousers some muddy stains
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I like travel-poems...this poem makes me experience the whole trip of yours....your words are so much expressive...great work...thanks and God bless you
Excellent poetry on nature. Vivid images, very descriptive, wonderful flow. Deserves above 10. Into my poem list.
My mind too was on a ride and beautiful it was, enjoying the wayside scenes! Here Nature comes alive in all its beauty and variety......! Lovely poem!
This one is the first in your chest of poems that I could lay my hands upon. it was a great pleasure to have read this poem. Your roaming observations on your bicycle reminds me of Robert Frost and glimpses of his pure observation of nature. Thanks.
Well description. Very nicely envisioned. Many thanks for sharing.
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8/1/2025 3:38:57 AM # 1.0.0
Enjoyed your ride to a country side on your bicycle! One will be covering so much of distance with vistas of beautiful sights and scenery! You have described them all in remarkable clarity and vividness! A beautiful write!