A Trickle Of Thoughts - 74 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 74

Rating: 5.0

My freedom is all I got!
Not under any condition,
shall I allow myself
to be manipulated,
as the water that comes
from the faucet,
always controlled
by another's hands.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan -Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 01 December 2024

This is a prolific and profound piece......

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 December 2024

Enjoyed this Bravo Rose-Marie Thanx for sharing and yr support

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Man covets freedom and cherishes freedom. But, it is hard to preserve our freedom in all its senses; And definitely, freedom does not come FREE. Hard work pays! A poem with deep meaning

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 December 2024

Freedom is precious and it has to be guarded under all circumstances....Thoughtful and brilliant poem. Top stars and to my favourite

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Tom Allport 02 December 2024

The cost of freedom is priceless...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 December 2024

Great poem worded by a great mind and so complete. I admired the words here and myriad stars from me, constantly your friend, in absence and in presence

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 December 2024

Poemhunter got upside down, I have lost my way in it, too many poems in the poetry side, methinks, I dunno, but I have lost my way in this poetrysite, I am trying now to recover, thank you for your attentive thoughts

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Sandra Feldman 28 December 2024

Bravo to that

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Rob Lamberton 26 December 2024

You are a wild river flowing pure and free Rose Marie!

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Rebecca Navarre 16 December 2024

Magnificently composed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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