Saturday, July 8, 2023

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 50 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Young love is like a tidal wave
It occurs unexpectedly
Sweeps everything
That gets in its way
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Indira Renganathan 18 July 2023

True. Such is love. A perfect definition of love rightly said...liked

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Rebecca Navarre 12 July 2023

Oh, how true and beautifully expressed, swept away by love and all we can do is pray! ... Beyond #ing+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 July 2023

A hauntingly beautiful poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 10 July 2023

Brilliant love Mam.

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2) You have captured the essence of teenage love very hearteningly. The underlying emotions make it wonderful and most enjoyable. Top score and added to MyFavouritePoems

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What beautiful poem! On

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Susan Williams 10 July 2023

you have immortalized the tumultuous emotions in young first love! Bravo! ! None of us can forget or truly regret the agony and ecstacy of your ove. top marks

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M. Asim Nehal 10 July 2023

Very true, I fully agree, by the time we come to realise everything alongwith heart is gone.... TOO GOOD *****

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Floating with the wind - the trickle thoughts moves into a lofty height....Full score for this marvellous poem. And to my favourite.

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Wonderful poem dear Poetess Rose. Reading this poem, I am swept away into ocean of love.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 July 2023

this is a beautiful piece Bravo Rose-Marie! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 09 July 2023

Absolutely perfect.....thank u, dear poetess.....

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Love is so powerful that it wipes off everything in its way. Nothing can defend it. It's so formidable.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 July 2023

So true my dear. It comes like a storm and sweeps away the hearts. Nicely inked.

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2023

Outstanding!

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2023

A poem so deeply felt and correctly envisioning young love, it becomes a very special one ever read. Just perfectly concieved and never to forget. Marvelous and more, and for sure, top favorite forevermore.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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