A Trickle Of Thoughts - 50 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 50

Rating: 5.0


Young love is like a tidal wave
It occurs unexpectedly
Sweeps everything
That gets in its way
And the heart cannot even
Defend itself
It leaves oneself
Floating along with the wind.


Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 08 July 2023

Outstanding!

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 July 2023

So true my dear. It comes like a storm and sweeps away the hearts. Nicely inked.

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Love is so powerful that it wipes off everything in its way. Nothing can defend it. It's so formidable.

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Anjandev Roy 09 July 2023

Absolutely perfect.....thank u, dear poetess.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 July 2023

this is a beautiful piece Bravo Rose-Marie! ! ! !

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Indira Renganathan 18 July 2023

True. Such is love. A perfect definition of love rightly said...liked

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Rebecca Navarre 12 July 2023

Oh, how true and beautifully expressed, swept away by love and all we can do is pray! ... Beyond #ing+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 July 2023

A hauntingly beautiful poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 10 July 2023

Brilliant love Mam.

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2) You have captured the essence of teenage love very hearteningly. The underlying emotions make it wonderful and most enjoyable. Top score and added to MyFavouritePoems

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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