She is so silent
Like the icy water
On the rocky river
Yet inside
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A touching poem with a brilliant metaphor. RMJ you have thrust into a nut shell a vast ocean. To my poem list
A vision beyond and marvellous thoughts encapsulated through this brilliant poem.
Awesome, In the state of being self. Articulate poetry. Full Stars.
silent like the icy water on the rocky river is a great simile and a brilliant thought Madam Rose.
As always, Rose Marie has been able to capture a little ocean in this capsule. Beauty augmented by the exquisite metaphor. Enjoyed reading, envious of the brevity you have achieved in expressing the theme.5 *s
the pen of Rose Marie gives us such lovely images to capture our imagination as we consider her embedded meanings ---5 gazing-in-wonder stars and a happy favconsider
Absolutely stunning metaphor of the inner journey on the river of life.
So impeccably and originally described, and inner life and beauty yet to be discovered, which is what really counts! A flowing work, full of greatness and delight,
A most beautiful, original and poetic of someone's deep personality and flow.
I love cold mountain streams! Great imagery and insight!