A Trickle Of Thoughts -47 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts -47

Rating: 5.0


She is so silent
Like the icy water
On the rocky river
Yet inside
It flows patiently
And silently
Waiting the gentle touch
And warmth of the sun.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 16 April 2022

A most beautiful, original and poetic of someone's deep personality and flow.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 April 2022

the brilliance is wonderfully beautiful Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 16 April 2022

So impeccably and originally described, and inner life and beauty yet to be discovered, which is what really counts! A flowing work, full of greatness and delight,

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Richard Wlodarski 16 April 2022

Absolutely stunning metaphor of the inner journey on the river of life.

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David Wood 16 April 2022

This poem flows with such gentle beauty, it's just lovely.

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Rob Lamberton 04 May 2025

I love cold mountain streams! Great imagery and insight!

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A touching poem with a brilliant metaphor. RMJ you have thrust into a nut shell a vast ocean. To my poem list

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 April 2022

Loved it, dearest Rose.........10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 April 2022

A vision beyond and marvellous thoughts encapsulated through this brilliant poem.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 April 2022

Awesome, In the state of being self. Articulate poetry. Full Stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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