She is so silent
Like the icy water
On the rocky river
Yet inside
It flows patiently
And silently
Waiting the gentle touch
And warmth of the sun.
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So impeccably and originally described, and inner life and beauty yet to be discovered, which is what really counts! A flowing work, full of greatness and delight,
Absolutely stunning metaphor of the inner journey on the river of life.
A touching poem with a brilliant metaphor. RMJ you have thrust into a nut shell a vast ocean. To my poem list
A vision beyond and marvellous thoughts encapsulated through this brilliant poem.
Awesome, In the state of being self. Articulate poetry. Full Stars.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A most beautiful, original and poetic of someone's deep personality and flow.