Thursday, September 19, 2019

A Trickle Of Thought -5 Comments

Rating: 4.6

A politician who
Promises everything
And gives too much
Will take more
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 29 December 2022

Did he infringe on your water rights? Some of the "Trickle Of Thought" sequence seems to be missing!

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Varsha M 20 June 2021

Just the wise words. Better to be on guard of them all.

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Top marks dear friend

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Shaun Cronick 28 July 2020

A warning poem with its foreboding message is worth rereading to learn from and never forget. Then to pass on to others.10+ and many thanks Rose Marie.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2020

Well said. Sharp and Succinct 10+

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Sandra Feldman 12 January 2020

How very, very exact! And how very, very perfectly said! . Impeccable and great! To my treasure chest. immediately.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 October 2019

A very cleverly structured poem, the words of your choice are applicable in all countries where dictatorship prevails. I had to come and read this wonderous poem again, dear Mrs. Juan Austin. Such a gorgeous brevity. Up ToMyPoemList.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2019

Politics! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2019

I know too well these kind of politicians, the most inhuman of mankind in the political world One way thinkers, nasty leeches, so very sorry Mrs.Juan-Austin. This is an awfully honest poem. Politics is not for me, politicians never keep their (promised) promise.. Thank you for sharing this honest poem, Mrs. Juan-Austin. God´s Blessings in Abundance.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2019

A bitter truth, so is the politics.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

So true and happening, and still such is the magic of soothing words even if not true.Well said dear poet. Well said dear poet.

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Chima Ononogbu 22 September 2019

This is absolutely right, they hardly give a thing without taking more and more. Thanks for sharing Rose.

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Shaun Cronick 20 September 2019

A true sad sign of the times. Politicians position of privilege is so abused, but there are a few who champion us. Thank you Rose Marie for writing a strong thought-provoking piece. Excellent.10+++ and added to my poem list.

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Anjandev Roy 20 September 2019

Even your very soul.......absolutely true.Thank u, dear Rose. anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 September 2019

A disappointing truth about the greedy politicians. A strong poem, dear ate Rose...10+++

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James Mclain 19 September 2019

How true this is and it's sad. Great poem my dear, James McLain

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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