A Trickle Of Thought - 4 Comments

Birds evoke freedom…"They can even soar To heavens above" I like it!

Indeed freedom of birds. Everyone desires. We should maintain thiy freedom in our lives in all fields. A freedom that has no restrictions. Thoughtful one.

Excellent write.....wonderful to read....

Wonderful poem, dear Rose! How nice it would be if we were born as birds...5 stars

A metaphor poem so might say about freedom of movement, maybe down to for the reader to decide. If you sometimes reread a poem you can pick up a little bit more each time from a different train of thought. 10+ and many thanks again good Rose Marie.

They can navigate the world Without fear of border patrols They can even soar To heavens above. wonderful aspirations.. to become a bird.. fine.. tony

Hindu philosophy proclaims the winged species superior to mankind. Imagination on perfect flight. Good allegory 10+

Birds! ! ! Flying over, Everywhere! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Indeed, I envy the birds that can fly either, they can even soar to heavens above...... WOW! What a greatest relief! I could that once in one of my dreams, soaring highest above.........fascinating poem, brillianty worded, dear Mrs.Juan-Austin. Truly an inspiring thought. Perfectly conveyed. Up YoMyPoemList. A 10 Full Score poet friend

Man has not only divided the earth in various parts, he has divided even the heavens. Earth or heavens for the birds it's still united.

Yes indeed, but wait till they can control the skies as well, the drone birds have already arrived, and till then we can envy the birds

This poem stirs up those important discussions that have gone awry in our world. Freedom of movement is part and parcel of our nature and no border can stop it. Rose, thanks for this thrilling piece of thought.

Beautifully written as always, simply to be a free as a bird. So pure and eloquent lovingly composed. Thank you for writing and sharing this Rose Marie.10+++ and added to my poem list.

Without fear of border patrols........beautifully penned. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

An inspiring thought, dear ate Rose...10+++++

A sense of freedom springs from your wonderful poem!