A Trickle Of Thought - 39 Comments

Bedazzling imagination Mam.

This is absolutely brilliant......thank u, dear poetess....

Aimlessly soaring in the sky.....brilliant.....

Perfectly said on an eccentric behaviour.....top score

Wow dear Rose! This is a wonderful poem. A man with no control of his mind can never win anything. He is really like a balloon soaring in darkness.

Wonderful poem with great imagery.

A balance of both mind and heart is necessary to keep the heart sane.. lovely poem

part 1 I understand the reality of your society, and you have the right to pay attention to the role of the mind in human life and societies, but on the other hand we have hearts the source of emotions and feelings and we control emotions with the mind

part 2 and we control emotions with the mind. So every thing in moderation is the best stratiges in life, thanks for this important and attractive topic of poetry, well done, Rose

like a balloon Aimlessly soaring in the sky

Lovely poem, sounds like the people running out government aimlessly soaring in the sky, they're all full of wind. Too marks, you've described them perfectly! !