A person with an
Uncontrollable mind
Never wins a battle.
He is like a balloon
Aimlessly soaring in the sky.
His head expands and pops
All on its own
In the cosmic darkness.
Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
A balance of both mind and heart is necessary to keep the heart sane.. lovely poem
part 1 I understand the reality of your society, and you have the right to pay attention to the role of the mind in human life and societies, but on the other hand we have hearts the source of emotions and feelings and we control emotions with the mind
part 2 and we control emotions with the mind. So every thing in moderation is the best stratiges in life, thanks for this important and attractive topic of poetry, well done, Rose
Perfectly said on an eccentric behaviour.....top score
Wow dear Rose! This is a wonderful poem. A man with no control of his mind can never win anything. He is really like a balloon soaring in darkness.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful poem with great imagery.