A Trickle Of Thought -11 Comments

A meaningful poem full of hope beyond our senses.

So worthy of a reread and another full score. Some poems merely sparkle while others do shine. This shines and so, so brightly. Thanks again Rose Marie for a great write.

Natural laws! ! ! With the romance of the wind! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A superbly worded and imagined beautiful poem Rose Marie. And your second stanza is the stuff poetry dreams are made of. A full score and so warmly and richly deserved. Take care.

Brilliant second stanza! A spllediid write.....10/10

time will come we have to stop our journey but time will be continue with its an unstoppable journey and the whole nature is key

Yeah very nice thought. Loved it.

This is an excellent write.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

this lovely poem evoking the memory forward and backward, and in both; optimistically spreading a breeze of mercy and love.. this humanity poem deserves 10++Brilliant

Hi, thanks This type of poem can be used as a therapy to people too Well done

Yet the wind will continue to touch And the sun will always rise To those whom we always loved and left behind.

An important thought too.

2) that makes the warm summer day retrieve a coldest effect, a powerful worded poem, must I say here beautifully worded, with sadness on top I'd like to take this sad, but realistic foresight to my poemsList, if I may....

this lovely poem, makes me think very deep indeed, there will be....absolutely, there will be........ after having read this loveliest impressive poem, there's left much melancholy, like a summer's day full of chilly breeze

We should abound in love while we are still alive. We should love the nature and thank God for the free air we breathe and the warmth of the sun we enjoy. An inspiring poem, dear ate Rose.....10+++

What a marvelous thought. Nothing less than 10++ Yet the wind will continue to touch And the sun will always rise To those whom we always loved and left behind.